Write the right words, and make them real

“Oh!  That’s so addicting.”  Actually, annoying is the word that comes to mind when I see or hear addictingAddictiveAddictive is a word.  Addicting is not a word, and it’s a teeny-bopper mistake that I am seeing more frequently from writers who should know better.

How can so many writers not know which words are real?  What’s gotten into everyone?  Should I blame IMing or TwitterFacebook, maybe?  I don’t know, but the problem is everywhere I turn it seems.

Progressive Insurance commercial:  “We’re the only ones that do.”  Ahh!  Only ones who do.  Who, not that.  The word ones refers to living, breathing entities, which should be the first clue to the writer of that particular ad that s/he’s made a mistake.

24:  “…safety deposit box…”  Where’s my pencil?  I need to poke out my eye.  Safe deposit box.  A safe deposit box is a box inside a safe, which is how those particular types of boxes got their names.  (I was a credit union executive before I was a full-time writer.  I think you can take my word on this one).

CNN:  “Impact Your World.”  You’re kidding, right?  The moment that show was advertised, I emailed CNN.  Let’s just think a moment about what ‘impact your world‘ means.  Imagine a world.  Now imagine a huge hand smacking the world.  The smack is the impact.  The hand had an impact on the world.  Impact needs to be followed by ‘on’ or ‘of’ or some other appropriate article to make sense.

When I see impact these days, I see it incorrectly used in place of effect or affect.  This tells me I’m working with either a lazy writer or a writer who want h/her work to sound important.  Impact is one of those words that is crisp to the ear.  Short.  Punchy.  This is why it is so often used in advertising and sales.  It’s one of those words that should tell  listeners (or readers) that they’re being sold something.  Someone wants to convince them of something.  Impact has gone the way of jargon, and should be avoided at (nearly) all costs, save when speaking about teeth.

History Channel:  “The answer lies…”  Oh, god, please, not the History Channel.  I love the History Channel, and the more I watch it, the more I hear this mistake.  “The answer lay…” People lie.  Things lay.  That’s your shortcut for today.  My colleague, Mignon Fogarty can give you some more examples, but for now, just remember:  if it breathes, it lies.

Pick your adQuality. Since when does the word quality not have to be quantified?  When you write, “That’s quality work,” what do you mean?  What kind of quality?  Good?  Bad?  Mediocre?

Badly. I leave you with badly.  When this word started to replace bad, I don’t know; but it has to stop.  When you write “I want it badly,” what you are telling the reader is that you don’t know how to want very well.  The sentence should read, “I want it so much,” or “I want it a whole lot.”  If you can want something badly, you should also be able to want something goodly, and we all know that’s just not an option.

Do you have any pet peeve words or phrases?  Share them here.  If you have a question for me on the editing process or just want to know how you can better please your editor, ask me.  I may be crabby, but I am here to help.

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4 thoughts on “Write the right words, and make them real

  1. Michael Evans has indicated you are a fellow group member of Jacksonville Business Journal:

    I never realized that “addicting” is not a word. Learn something new every day! My pet peeve is people using “should of, could of, etc” instead of “should have, could have, etc”

    – Michael Evans


  2. You made my day. Don’t forget nauseated v. nauseous.

    While it could be argued that your take on “impact” re: the CNN commercial doesn’t take into account more recent uses as a verb not requiring on/of etc., that phrase bugs me, too, but for a different reason. When I think of “impact” as a verb, I go straight to the original definition (to pack in tightly) that turns into an adjective when talking about an impacted colon. “Impact Your World” suddenly doesn’t sound very appealing. 🙂


    1. Oh, I completely agree. Nauseated vs. nauseous. I just want to smack something – someone (upside the head). Why is this so difficult?

      I did, actually, take into consideration the recent use of ‘impact’ as a verb. In the editing world, those of us outside of the advertising/marketing worlds, we still require on/of, etc. It’s a common complaint on our boards, and we all are trying to do our best to get people to wake up and think about what they’re communicating. Grrr!

      Thank you so much for reading The Crabby Copy Editor, and thank you, too, for the comment and suggestion. (Always appreciated!)




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